Tell Me is going through the last wringer in the Mischief-Harper Collins machine, and the current (final?) proof reader’s favourite “bit” and suggestion for the “blurb” is this:
I don’t kiss you. I position you against me, and I slide my hands under your skirt. I shove the skirt up to your waist – and I’m very pleased you followed instructions, and there is a garter belt there, no panties. Very convenient for me.
—I obey.
You do.
I say… Meh. Too typical of the genre, and insufficiently typical of this book. He says, but that’s how you reel typical readers. I say… Meh.
You say: For fuck’s sake, woman, could you let the experts do their job?
It’s really hard.
Me? I don’t obey very well. At all.
mjc
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TASTE Tell Me:
Before: how it begins (prologue)
Day 1: Maybe
- Maybe: “I’m just going to enjoy knowing he’s in my pocket.”
- Danger: “I’m looking for the elevated heart rate emoticon.”
- (N-entirely-SFW) Words are dangerous: From hopeful to hard in three adjectives
- Cyber-adulteress: “I don’t want you to judge me.”
- (Totally NSFW) Tumble: “You won’t be on your feet for long.”
Jump ahead:
Day 19: Interview for an Affair
NEXT WEEK: I really hope I get to see the cover mock ups…
m jane colette 